The mouth is still too small/narrow. It doesn’t have to be head-split-in-half, but still some bigger that it currently is.
Just my 2 cents, and worth as much.
“Then I shaved off his ponytail for a souvenir”.
That says so much on so many levels.
She has street cred that NO ONE can deny.
He’s humiliated, and can’t deny it.
She showed him undeserved mercy……once.
And I’ll bet a dollar to a doughnut that no one EVER even thought about attempting to molest her again.
I hope that Cheryl disinfected and bagged that ponytail. And then washed herself thoroughly. The hygiene habits of most street gangs isn’t exactly up to hospital surgery standards.
Personally, I liked it better when the history strips at the bottom appeared in chronological order (within a story) as you scrolled down. I know the navigation buttons refer to “previous” and “newer” entries in opposition to that, but it’s easier to tell a new reader to go there for background information without having to tell them to watch the strip titles and if they show a number, page down to the one labeled 1 then backtrack as necessary. Ideally, I’d like to see the stories in chronological order, too, with any non-canon strips at the end. But that’s less important. Why were they reordered to the way they appear now?
IF i remember correctly.. (which i may not..) a while back PC had the comic site remade,. by one who knew how to make decent sites.. and then he dropped off the planet.!!
so,, PC does not know how to change it..
… i should probably go to ‘Word Press” site an learn , set up and maintaining , a comic web page…
actually,. i’m beginning to like the dog look.. it’s alien enough, but still got the “dog” look… 🙂
The mouth is still too small/narrow. It doesn’t have to be head-split-in-half, but still some bigger that it currently is.
Just my 2 cents, and worth as much.
as i sed,, beginning,,.
and as PC said.. he is still working on it…
It’s improving with each strip. I’m happy to wait to see where it’s going.
“Then I shaved off his ponytail for a souvenir”.
That says so much on so many levels.
She has street cred that NO ONE can deny.
He’s humiliated, and can’t deny it.
She showed him undeserved mercy……once.
And I’ll bet a dollar to a doughnut that no one EVER even thought about attempting to molest her again.
I hope that Cheryl disinfected and bagged that ponytail. And then washed herself thoroughly. The hygiene habits of most street gangs isn’t exactly up to hospital surgery standards.
Personally, I liked it better when the history strips at the bottom appeared in chronological order (within a story) as you scrolled down. I know the navigation buttons refer to “previous” and “newer” entries in opposition to that, but it’s easier to tell a new reader to go there for background information without having to tell them to watch the strip titles and if they show a number, page down to the one labeled 1 then backtrack as necessary. Ideally, I’d like to see the stories in chronological order, too, with any non-canon strips at the end. But that’s less important. Why were they reordered to the way they appear now?
IF i remember correctly.. (which i may not..) a while back PC had the comic site remade,. by one who knew how to make decent sites.. and then he dropped off the planet.!!
so,, PC does not know how to change it..
… i should probably go to ‘Word Press” site an learn , set up and maintaining , a comic web page…
That would be wonderful. Especially if you could fix the auto-update.
And add a Patreon button. And a PayPal button. And…and…
Are none of the pups going to ask about the dragonettes?