Didn’t even break the bottle. Stand down Ronnie, he’s not getting up for awhile, but he’ll have a terrible headache. Stretcher and handcuffs coming up. Kelsie is brutally honest about herself, but she is extremely clever as well. Jeyta would be better for the reason she gave. Miral will not be good for awhile.
Is the comic too visually dark? Do I need to turn up the lights a notch?
On a brighter note, I used to have three young friendly-not-really-friends who worked in my favorite Chinese restaurant.
Last year the three returned to Hong Kong.
I don’t go there much any more, because it involves riding my motorcycle in Savannah traffic, but I went today.
All three are safe, living and working in Maryland.
So, yeah, I have something to be thankful for.
Two of them: https://www.deviantart.com/cat-man-dancing/art/Alan-s-fiancee-with-a-380-187448557
A lot of the space, forest and night scenes are kind of hard to make out. Part of that, of course, is the nature of the location, but they could use a bit more light. Some of the office scenes could likewise use a bit more light.im not critiquing the story itself, it’d just be nice to see what we’re looking at a bit more.
I already tried increasing the brightness, but it didn’t help too much.
Didn’t even break the bottle. Stand down Ronnie, he’s not getting up for awhile, but he’ll have a terrible headache. Stretcher and handcuffs coming up. Kelsie is brutally honest about herself, but she is extremely clever as well. Jeyta would be better for the reason she gave. Miral will not be good for awhile.
I suspect that somehow, Kelly might not be as deceased as everyone assumed…
Excellent suspicion, have they done a search of the valley yet? I believe they all assumed total fatalities.
Is the comic too visually dark? Do I need to turn up the lights a notch?
On a brighter note, I used to have three young friendly-not-really-friends who worked in my favorite Chinese restaurant.
Last year the three returned to Hong Kong.
I don’t go there much any more, because it involves riding my motorcycle in Savannah traffic, but I went today.
All three are safe, living and working in Maryland.
So, yeah, I have something to be thankful for.
Two of them: https://www.deviantart.com/cat-man-dancing/art/Alan-s-fiancee-with-a-380-187448557
nope not dark.. just right.!!
A lot of the space, forest and night scenes are kind of hard to make out. Part of that, of course, is the nature of the location, but they could use a bit more light. Some of the office scenes could likewise use a bit more light.im not critiquing the story itself, it’d just be nice to see what we’re looking at a bit more.
I already tried increasing the brightness, but it didn’t help too much.
And yes, I am rather enjoying your stories…
it has been dark at times, but not recently. Two wives! Ah to be younger…
Story wise, it’s as dark as it needs to be… Optics wise? It could probably do with a bit more ambient lighting…
Happy Thanksgiving All..