an kudos… driving into base, was not what i was thinking… but just maybe that plan might haz merit,, with a few changes..
this is why i don’t read ahead,, i liked to be surprised as every one else.. tho i have seen em, i haven’t read em.. .. that’s one bright green cat…no need to reply, just saying, when scrolled though, that one stood out…
That last panel of the chase took me a while to figure out.
I think it would parse better if it was reversed, basically so they can be going up one side and down the other.
At least, that is what I figure must be happening.
Right now, since they seem to be going the same direction, it took me the longest time to figure out how she got above him.
Wondering why she wasn’t jumping from the tree TO the cliff finally gave me a clue…
I didn’t see the panels before the change, but 2&3 has them going up and 4 has them going down. If they all up or all down I could see it, but it is confusing to me anyway. Are they just up and over a ridge? If so then it makes sense.
yes, up an over last ridge.. .. the problem before, most people think in a straight line,, an before all the action was left to right (which confused the last panel) , but now with the two panels switched ,right to left, it now looks like a straight line..
hope that helps.. 🙂
..tree diving.. never ends well..
an kudos… driving into base, was not what i was thinking… but just maybe that plan might haz merit,, with a few changes..
this is why i don’t read ahead,, i liked to be surprised as every one else.. tho i have seen em, i haven’t read em.. .. that’s one bright green cat…no need to reply, just saying, when scrolled though, that one stood out…
That last panel of the chase took me a while to figure out.
I think it would parse better if it was reversed, basically so they can be going up one side and down the other.
At least, that is what I figure must be happening.
Right now, since they seem to be going the same direction, it took me the longest time to figure out how she got above him.
Wondering why she wasn’t jumping from the tree TO the cliff finally gave me a clue…
Damn, you’re right. I’ll have to change it, and a couple of panels from the TGW-398 as well.
Thanks.
Is this better? I flipped panels 2 and 3 to match 4.
I didn’t see the panels before the change, but 2&3 has them going up and 4 has them going down. If they all up or all down I could see it, but it is confusing to me anyway. Are they just up and over a ridge? If so then it makes sense.
yes, up an over last ridge.. .. the problem before, most people think in a straight line,, an before all the action was left to right (which confused the last panel) , but now with the two panels switched ,right to left, it now looks like a straight line..
hope that helps.. 🙂